so...here it is.....after much undesired deliberation....'my first blog'
i cant imagine the most appropriate way to begin this other than a simple confession of the humble being that i had been in the past........the present and future shall proceed henceforth...
Lost in darkness, no one to guide
The stillness creeps to mesmerize
And silence leadens all the sighs
A tear trickles, another breath gone
Beats again, in a body pawn
Where happy thoughts never knew bourne
is now a funeral of the heart forlorn
For honest thoughts never begetted trust
nor were accepted decisions just
depressing it was to see values fail
But couldn't let go, they followed the trail
Had to be removed, they made me cry
Made me seek the reasons why
It's silent again in that stillness deep
Another tear trickles, I try not to weep
For in that darkness I could see
my conscience stabbed to death by me.
5 comments:
though ur blog name and its address warns the potential readers against perusing your "personal" thoughts, i've dared to toe the line and mind u,with the slightest of regrets :P
the poem is beautiful, and i dnt know why, it strikes a similar note (at least at the end) with one of my blog poems (if u've read it by any chance). i'm glad i hadn't read urs b4 writin mine or else i'd've held myself guilty of plagiarism.
ur thoughts are profound, meditative in certain ways. hope 2 read more of such stuff frm u
nice way to represent a simple sentiment. its natural for a person of values to find him/herself at bay with the same in today's world.
btw catchy blog name.
bahut badhiya..... bahut hi badhiya....
samajh nahin aata how to admire you for your thoughts and your creativity.
The best of the Poetry I have ever read in my life!!!
:)
good one!!!
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