Was not Aeneas’ love truly deep?
But Dido was left on the shores to weep.
Romeo and Juliet did God Bless,
but their love too was not a success.
Is it lover’s luck or some strange coincidence?
All these stories failed, even with love immense
Left behind are wounds that never healed,
A loved yarn with agonies concealed.
It’s hard to guess what true love gives
And for evidence only such a story lives.
But two things for sure that lovers gain,
--a broken heart and a life long pain.
18 comments:
kya ho gaya hai tujhe?? s thr sumthing "..." ?? ;)
Left behind are wounds that never healed,
A loved yarn with agonies concealed.
I thought it was roses , and their perfume around..
The thorns lay waiting , it soon revealed..
But two things for sure that lovers gain,
--a broken heart and a life long pain.
very true sweetheart...
who would you give your vote if Bunty/Babli and Romeo/Juliet stood for the Best Eternal Love Story ! Ever thought why the movie Ek Duje ke liye was a big hit ! The answer is simple my lady- tragedy and that makes love not for the feeble hearted..
thou hath a wrong conception of love as i may comprehend frm ur ideas of love ........& i may tell u that if thr r stories of ROMEO & JULIET.....then at the same time BASSANIO & PORTIA's story is also known.....
have faith in love thou will definately get one .....and then u wll not say....."it’s hard to guess what true love gives
And for evidence only such a story lives.
But two things for sure that lovers gain,
--a broken heart and a life long pain."
i have to say, you are very talented...the poetry is top notch...but the last two posts are scary! :|
hey sonal
the poem is gud... but will u pls stop scaring me??
u still remember aeneas and dido ... hmm lol.. i kno where the inspiration is coming from :P
well-cemented, compact and logical piece..a real cerebral composition..a draught of fresh air..i liked the way you have forthrightly rejected the concept..
i do find it even more agreeable since i share this pessimism too..
As i suggested earlier read Devdas..Tragedy couldn't have been worse than for this man... may be u will even better urself next time. :)
meri poem chori ki!!! hehe.. nice too senti...
Things are beautiful things are bright.
Your opinion shouldn't always be right..
Love is enjoyment like grapes and vine.
pain is just another way to put you back in line ..
hell!! what should i know i am just matching words to make a poem rhyme..
which couldn't be sold for a dime..
ever tried crying in the rain.
wait a minute am i going insane.
'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all
....of course everyone loves a happy ending!
bilkul sach likha hai iss post mein, main sehmat hoon
:D
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